1000 word plus writing exercise

Thought it important to mention that I think I may have over done it a bit with my time and effort into that particular outcome, but thought it a good opportunity to learn more about something always been curious about once and for all- Twins/other peoples perceptions etc, why is it such a big deal at times to some??? But also thought it a good opportunity to practice/learn how to express self in writing. 

I have made more notes with regards to other considerations etc of what was thinking of writing before settling on this particular topic of twins in the hard copy workbook that is handed in on my desk for the tutor. 

Also I have far exceeded the word count, but hopefully that will not be a disadvantage, because it is a topic in which 1000 words would not have sufficed into seeing more then a handful of peoples perspectives.